| + t'was war | Dely Cristian Marian [26.Jan.14 22:32] |
| Hi Corina I like the way you make your lirycs soften a thousand fights " mon chouchou" is meaningful and adorable here because here lives a customized language a mother of learning by itself and as a student I say it is good writing Warm regards! | |
| = Marian | Corina Gina Papouis [27.Jan.14 21:58] |
| Your words are stroking the very poetic side of my ego (if there is such a thing! :p) I guess when we talk about loss is important to lay the sword to sleep although grief is a process and we deny it with such vengeance...and if I was able to buffer those feelings with the softer side of my lyrics all I can say is Thank you for a lovely feedback. The friend I have dedicated this poem to is now resting in peace. Sincerely, C | |