| = re: hate | Corina Gina Papouis [29.Jan.15 22:56] |
| It is too simplistic. Try to develop one idea at a time: example: the strength you say is needed - where does it come from? and where does it go? do you need the arrow? have you lost the bow? :) keep trying! practice makes it perfect! Regards, Corina | |
| = Thanks. | Andrei Rafael [21.Feb.15 07:26] |
| It is supposed to be simplistic, I was 16 than. Yet, there are many ideas in the poem and developing them all would be too mystified, hard to get, abstruse. I can't focus on one idea, when inspiration comes, it comes unable to change it than. But now I could... | |
| = Andrei. | Andrei Rafael [21.Feb.15 07:26] |
| P.S. I also have the arrow and the bow, but I can't use them, though I wish I could. | |