| + Soulless inhumanity... | Romulus Câmpan Maramureșanu [13.Nov.22 12:12] |
| Dana, since we live in an unfortunate, digital age of information overload, many will simply lack the patience to read through multiple screens covered by a story. May I suggest posting fragments, one, or depending of lengths, groups of chapters, with a "continued..." alert? Choice and curiosity go well together. Imagine serving a pot of honey, one spoon at a time, instead of trying to drink it! Just a thought. Now, the story broke my heart. The graphic depiction of inhumanity, the hope, the broken hopes, the little soul marble, absolutely captivating. You have a rare talent to write your soul too, not only your mind. rcm | |