| = Appreciation... | Romulus Câmpan Maramureșanu [10.Apr.24 15:50] |
| Well done! I have only added two comas in the last stanza. They are not absolutely necessary, however, I feel they may add to the melody. Please feel free to restore, I will then leave it as you initially wrote. As a token of appreciation and encouragement, I raised your level to comment without approval, very much looking forward to support your advancement. You are talented beyond doubt, and it's an honour to have you collaborating. Please feel free to comment on any other texts, you contribution will certainly mean a step forward for the English Agonia. rcm | |