| = A powerful, unsettling exploration of human apathy and the haunting consequences | Apostol Georgiana Nicoleta [08.Dec.24 19:23] |
| This is a beautifully crafted and deeply poignant poem that holds a mirror to the discomfort of human apathy. With minor adjustments to structure and transitions, it could sharpen its impact even further. It’s an exceptional piece that leaves the reader reflecting on their own capacity for compassion and the fragility of human connection. Keep exploring this voice—it’s both powerful and necessary! | |