| = The picture I've been longing to see is now here! | Joshua Vasquez Butawan [02.Dec.05 03:54] |
| Exquisite words, Those thingy are such a good stuff, my kinda food, it makes me live.hehe I was really fascinated with those endearing words you've used, the time goes by and everything changes, but this contraption you've made really turned me back to my old self, I wanna see such beautiful pics, pics of blood agony in silence, i like the earthly remains, so fantastic. I like the metaphors you've used it is so ironic your blood tides engulfed me, i can't escape, you've really made a powerful stuff! thanks for sharing good luck, dear Poetess/Muse | |
| = thank you | Dana Muºat [02.Dec.05 11:55] |
| Joshue, thanks for reading. My metamphors are ironic, but there are some places that they are just curdle from deep inside me. I'm a muse? I don't know...a poetess i'm not for sure. Yhank you, again. | |
| = Pure darkness | Elies [14.Aug.06 13:04] |
| You wrote this poem with such intense darkness and blood that I wonder about your (possible) influences : have you ever read poems by R.E.Howard (The songs of war and death - I translate from french : I don't know the original title) and by Lovecraft (Fungi of Yuggoth) ? If you don't have yet, you should for I think you'd really enjoy ! | |
| = Power, a super poem | wade [15.Aug.06 17:50] |
| Phew, what a write well done this is poetry in motion, i will pick up from the end which began thoughts of then you die yet then you live for a continuation of existance has no starting or ending point? | |