| = sound of the poetry downstairs... | Marius Surleac [03.Jun.08 15:06] |
| Soft, clever, elegant, peaceful. Beautiful poem. The second stanza is very expressive and visual. Marius | |
| = My opinion about this poem is just about the same... | John Willy Kopperud [04.Jun.08 11:07] |
| ...as Marius expresses. I must add this to Luminita: as if in a Sunday is not a valid way of writing in English. At present I can think of two valid options: As if it were Sunday or; As if on a Sunday. Cheers from Willy | |
| + beautiness, sharpness | Edilberto González Trejos [05.Jun.08 23:47] |
| Luminita, great translation, for I see music in Marinela`s verses in English. Powerful verses, plenty of beauty and reflecting a sharp mind | |