| = the ruined house | Fluerasu Petre [31.Jan.06 14:46] |
| this haiku was written under the inspiration of an old house which I saw in one of my journeys to the country... I hope I managed to discover the real pasion in that ruin... Peter | |
| = Reveal by hiding | Alina Maria Bica [02.Mar.06 14:58] |
| Petre, this is not poetry. I cannot find anzthing poetic in this text. If you want to reveal the passion in a ruin, don`t say exactly what you saw. Try to reveal by hiding. This is only an opinion because I want to be of use.... Respectfully, Alina | |
| = a haiku... not ideas... | Fluerasu Petre [05.Apr.06 14:34] |
| A Haiku is a poem without methapors... Without hidden senses... You reveal an image, that's all ... | |