| = Interesting lecture of a temptress Eve | Javier Raya [03.Mar.06 01:59] |
| Hi Alina. After read your text I was wondering among two hypothesis: the tone of your poem is the one of a sweet suggestion to a possesive lover, a sweet request for passion; or you (or the voice speaking in the text) are the possesing lover not suggesting, but ordering a lover to possess you (her). I like the way you managed the biblical reference of the Genesis to create an interesting lecture of it: was Eve (and for this very fact, women properly) not tempted, but somehow, temptress and cause of the doom of mankind? Was she conscious of what she was doing, and for this, despiting in some conscious, dark way, the rules of Paradise? Was she not as innocent as tradition ussualy shows her? Of course, this is my lecture of your poem, but in this line, you sweetly accuse women (each one, every one) of being both weak victim and fierce twig of her own, triggered passion, defining very accurately I may say, the contradictory essence of women. Greets. | |
| = For Javier | Alina Maria Bica [03.Mar.06 14:46] |
| Hi Javier! Thank you for reading my poem. I do believe that women are the victims of their own passions and Eve was meant to open the book of sins. Thank you for all your comments and appreciation. I am waiting for your visit any time! | |