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 =  suggestion...
Romulus Campan Maramuresanu
[29.Aug.07 09:45]
"Only it has just started" does not mean "A început, în sfârşit"; I would suggest "it finally started".



 =  English and Romanian version are not accurate tanslations of each other
Marian C Ghilea
[29.Aug.07 15:55]
始まっただけ (Hajimatta dake) = (It) only began (accurate translation). I didn't try to translate the poem from Romanian to English. The original version I wrote was in Japanese and I did my best to get both the meaning and keep the choka metric. In order to keep the right no. of syllables in English, I've made changes from a version to another.




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