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 =  you and do!
Marius Surleac
[25.Jan.08 01:05]
I put a spell on you, but try to do not to be you, because you have to do the text better. So, what do you have to do is to improve your text and do not use this undesired repetition of "you" and "do". Repetition is good only in particularly moments. Try to avoid this mistake!
Good luck!

 =  good job.
Christopher Thripp
[26.Jan.08 20:47]
I loved it .




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