| = please work a bit more... | Romulus Campan Maramuresanu [25.Jan.08 01:22] |
| Would you please do a VERY thorough check for what I see as being syntax and grammar inconsistencies? For example: "Because of the frostiness, only caterpillar feet cramped into floors blue marble. The thermometer looks like sensing a big (???), atoms, concentration – oscillating her (???) volume." "One eye stares on (at???) me," Very interesting work, deserves some more attention. | |
| = Thanks! | Marius Surleac [25.Jan.08 20:21] |
| Thank you! I payed attention to what you said and have modified it. Hope that will work this time. I am very pleased for the comments! | |
| = more... | Romulus Campan Maramuresanu [25.Jan.08 20:23] |
| caterpillar feet are cramped into floors (of???)blue marble | |