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 =  Grammar errors...
Edgar A. Baguio
[02.Oct.08 16:34]
Please fix all grammar errors..."word by word", "gets together the conceptions..", "without any resign all that is true"...just to cite a few.

A simple descriptive type of connected paragraphs. Sounds like one of my students in the University. But has a good unity of the theme.


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Marius Surleac
[02.Oct.08 16:36]
Ok! If you are so erudite can you help me fixing my grammar errors? Thank you!




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