| = Good job Sydney! | Marius Surleac [25.Feb.08 09:15] |
| Hello again Sydney! Very powerful aspects in this poem. My opinion is that you exposed the fall of World Trade Center towers, and the pain that affected all; or maybe I am wrong about my idea. But the poem truly "flows", a canopy of images: “Angel’s souls flee”,” its voice choked by maroon smoke”,” from the ashes rising an iron cross, upright and tall". Very beautiful, and I think that you deserve one more star. Hope you will get it! Cheers from Marius! | |
| = Marius might be... | John Willy Kopperud [25.Feb.08 20:40] |
| ...a bit beside the point. To me this seems quite like a description of an old wooden church, with the bell and everything. Am i mistaken, Sydney. Anyway, I really enjoyed this one. Powerful images. Drama. Cheers from Willy | |
| = Topic about the meaning ... anyway, it deserves to be read! | Marius Surleac [26.Feb.08 08:54] |
| Indeed Willy, I never thought to this interpretation but is very possible. Now, all we have to do is to wait for Sydney's response. | |
| = Thanks, you were right, Willy, it is a church! | Sydney Krivenko [27.Feb.08 02:07] |
| Hi, everyone! It seems that my new email address has not been rcognized in my profile. I do not get your notifications... so, its [email protected]. Please mark it down, as no one seems to control this site. Sad, really... It is indeed an old church. Saw it in a TV film burning and could hear the aching and moaning.. | |
| = True... | Marius Surleac [27.Feb.08 09:23] |
| Congratulations Willy! You were right! Good job Sydney! | |