| = pay attention! | Marius Surleac [05.Mar.08 10:46] |
| Chris my friend, you have excelled the number of syllables that, theoretically, a haiku has (17), though the traditional Japanese haiku has 17 on (sounds) - which makes the English haiku to be a little bit longer. So if we excel the number, in English will be much longer. Take a closer look! Cheers from Marius! | |
| = cheers. | Christopher Thripp [05.Mar.08 13:25] |
| There my freind a "haiku" no more ... | |
| = Is better now! | Marius Surleac [05.Mar.08 13:31] |
| Ok! Not it looks better, but I saw that you brought the rage against the haiku! Good job! Cheers! | |
| = cheers my freind. | Christopher Thripp [06.Mar.08 00:40] |
| hey i am open to much criticism ...I take it along with praise....i thank you marius. | |
| = Helping each other Chris! | Marius Surleac [06.Mar.08 10:50] |
| We must help each other. Let's keep going ... unknown awaits us! Cheers my friend! | |