| = I appreciate the imperative emotion you put forth here... | John Willy Kopperud [24.Apr.08 12:16] |
...but the grammar/syntax needs a bit of revising. It appears logical that the second line must read: "Hurl the sun and the moon into one being." Cheers from Willy | |
| = interesting... | Marius Surleac [24.Apr.08 12:18] |
| Interesting idea of alchemy for creating from passion a lovely being. Cheers | |
| = Thank you | Bogdan G. Marin [24.Apr.08 16:56] |
| John Willy Kopperud, thank you for showing me that mistake, and thank you for your comment. Marius Surleac, thank you too for reading "Alchemy", I`m glad you both liked it. | |