| = hmmmmmmm | Christopher Thripp [24.Apr.08 21:45] |
| interesting marius ..finding yourself at the bottom of the barrel looking up? or just realising you have tio start again from the bottom and finding yourself along the way? | |
| = truth you said Chris... | Marius Surleac [24.Apr.08 21:51] |
| Actually is about thoughts passing the mind, about finding lost memories and also starting to walk straight to the horizon on a different but better passageway. Thank you Chris for your exactly comment, you're right. Cheers and have a nice day! Marius | |
| = wonderful style | Mike Aspros [25.Apr.08 01:26] |
| first read I got the impression of starting on new path although you are heavy with doubt and insecurity but all you can do is do it. I like the sliding scale that shows everything we do that is big starts small as an idea. | |
| = thank you Mike... | Marius Surleac [25.Apr.08 11:31] |
| I appreciate your comment and I am delighted when my poem attracts different opinions. The scale you've mentioned is part from the “nonet” style: it starts with nine syllables on the first line and finishes with one syllable on the last line. Cheers and always welcome! | |