| = The essence of you... | Irene Singleton [15.May.08 23:40] |
| I love this - very sensual...then raunchy ;))) | |
| = Irene certainly has a point and.. | John Willy Kopperud [14.May.08 23:07] |
| ..."tits" as explicit language? Doesn't that strike other editors too as an exceedingly prudish label on this otherwise innocent, humorous and lighthearted poem? | |
| = thanks willy. | Christopher Thripp [15.May.08 03:31] |
| willy i take your advice and remove it off the bomb...it is meant to be funny...i laughed my man boobs off when i wrote it...I just could not resist adding that last line..i hope it brings a smile to many... also showing the weakness and honesty all in one hit... | |
| = Funny... | John Willy Kopperud [15.May.08 06:36] |
| ...it is! Cheers from Willy | |
| = keep the last line | Mike Aspros [15.May.08 07:55] |
| you capture the thought process perfectly. my opinion, don't change a thing. So well said, sensitive at first and then to lust. great poem! | |
| = humor. | Christopher Thripp [15.May.08 13:18] |
| risky... but hope it made you smile also ...got to have a little humor every now and again...I thought it was time to lighten things a little. | |
| = My comment?? | Irene Singleton [15.May.08 23:40] |
| I did have a point - I think - but I don't know where its gone :( | |
| = Return of the comment... | Irene Singleton [16.May.08 15:08] |
| My comment returns - thank you editors ;) | |
| = where has my(light our path) poem gone and my red star removed? | Christopher Thripp [16.May.08 03:59] |
| irene thanks for the comments ...appreciated ..now what i would like to know from agonia.net...is what happened to my red twinkler poem (light our path) off of the recommended list?can some one enlighten me here please...????? | |
| = lol for romance and intention... | Marius Surleac [17.May.08 10:22] |
| Very nice and very funny! I have started to read your poem and I said to myself: "there is some romance..." then when I reached the final I started to laugh - there is romance with a purpose. Great job Chris! Thank you for bringing the smile! Cheers my friend! | |