| = Important question, Chris. | John Willy Kopperud [19.May.08 09:42] |
How should man tackle defeat? The first stanza is good, but the second one seems less precise - maybe too many words? I give you credit for the theme, and I think that if you don't find a way to improve this one, it might be fruitful to post another along the same line of thought. With respect, cheers from Willy | |
| = thanks willy . | Christopher Thripp [19.May.08 15:57] |
| when somenone knows he has not given his best ...this was the theme...i understand what you are saying willy...thanks for the comment... | |