| + welcome new member... | Marius Surleac [19.May.08 10:42] |
| There is a deep philosophical thought concerned on the sense of life, social one and inner self-finding in, through existentialist questions. The language you use in the text is very dominant, creates images filled with emotions and above all, gives to the reader a bit from your feelings you draw through words smart used here. What I liked very much were few evocative fragments from the text: "using inert souls as mortar and razor-sharp will as tools" / "The tune of the war drums that still ring in my ears was synchronized to a barely audible internal rhythm" – great expressions. The final also sustains the idea the title invokes "doubt everything". Cheers and thanks for sharing this beautiful piece of your thoughts. | |
| = This prose piece... | John Willy Kopperud [19.May.08 20:00] |
| ...focuses sharply on existential problems and paradoxes. As readers we are not prompted into certain views. The author leaves us in an open existential landscape.This is very well delivered. Cheers from Willy | |
| = homo commoditas | Corina Gina Papouis [25.Jun.08 16:18] |
| The man in the mirror..your homo commoditas...deemphasized and empty..the sense of no hope and the acceptance of the void; reminds me of Anne Rice's Louis (the Vampire Chronicals) Moved me to the core... Do it again... Best wishes, Corina | |