| = great dan. | Christopher Thripp [24.May.08 06:56] |
| wicked dan ...loved it ...you surely have a way with your feelings and words ...really like to read your work. | |
| = , | dan marius [26.May.08 23:46] |
| I must say positive comments make me feel odd :) because now I have to say thank you and all that. But seriously, thank you. Glad you liked it (and all that) :) | |
| + strong poem... | Marius Surleac [27.May.08 00:02] |
| I see it harsher Chris. I like Dan's mood, to bring a different damaging shape and a cutting style to the projections of the text through our eyes (readers), the words have weight ("heads falling like feathers " / "humanity multiplied by 0" - quite brilliant idea), power ("every broken bone in this world comes into direct contact with Jesus") and creates a strong imagery. I like this tough style of yours Dan and for long time I wanted to give you a star, and now this text deserves it completely. Interesting opinion though, about the end of time Cheers from Marius! | |
| = . | dan marius [27.May.08 15:58] |
| yeaap/ bright yellow stars make Jack happy ! thanks | |
| + ANACALYPSIS | Edilberto González Trejos [28.May.08 23:52] |
| "every broken bone in this world comes into direct contact with Jesus the 21st century will be/ either nuclear or plain stupid .... the oceans will Eat you" Anacalyptical lines of lucidity and vision! Really like it SONGO | |