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= One reason...
John Willy Kopperud
[04.Jun.08 18:54]
...I enjoyed this one is that it doesn't offer an answer to
the question of natures boundaries. Within or outside the mind, or maybe both places? Puzzling and good images, too.
Cheers from Willy
= smart thinking!
Marius Surleac
[09.Jun.08 09:29]
Indeed daily events - there a little bit of surrealist shape that encloses the poem; I like the mood used to make a connection between the daily events and morphological state within the body. I like it.
Good job!

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= One reason...	John Willy Kopperud [04.Jun.08 18:54]
...I enjoyed this one is that it doesn't offer an answer to the question of natures boundaries. Within or outside the mind, or maybe both places? Puzzling and good images, too. Cheers from Willy

= smart thinking!	Marius Surleac [09.Jun.08 09:29]
Indeed daily events - there a little bit of surrealist shape that encloses the poem; I like the mood used to make a connection between the daily events and morphological state within the body. I like it. Good job!