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 =  And the question is...
John Willy Kopperud
[06.Jun.08 10:16]
...is not romancing the stone an option, in spite of that all engulfing fear? Sharp, poetic and fine, amigo!
Cheers from Willy

 =  Take note Willy
Edilberto González Trejos
[07.Jun.08 01:02]
You are sharp indeed WILLY... Please take note that the
dreams
"seem to sink like a paper boat"
I didn`t write sink and many-a-time paper boats do float... However, they are also sinkable...
A friendly hug pal!

SONGO

+ deep down in our souls...
Marius Surleac
[09.Jun.08 11:55]
Peaceful, silence invading the shape of thoughts, and dreams that even if are made like paper boat they won't sink but will remain at the surface of “water” (they are still somewhere high).

Smart and well done amigo!

Sincerely,
Marius

 =  still somewhere, indeed
Edilberto González Trejos
[10.Jun.08 22:47]
Still somewhere!
I appreciate your fine and sensitive reading as well as the time you took to get into this small text.

Deep from my Soul!

EDILBERTO




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