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= really nice one
Marius Surleac
[15.Jun.08 11:39]
Das ist a good poem, the rhyme and the rhythm are ok, the imagery also and it brings an old like breeze.

Good job!

Best wishes,
Marius

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= really nice one	Marius Surleac [15.Jun.08 11:39]
Das ist a good poem, the rhyme and the rhythm are ok, the imagery also and it brings an old like breeze. Good job! Best wishes, Marius