| + Coming from that painters own city... | John Willy Kopperud [10.Jun.08 16:15] |
| ...I must say this is an intriguing poetic representation of the work "Skriket." Images, rhytm and rhyme well handled, Marius, and an exquisitely good graphic solution! Cheers from Willy | |
| = "The Scream" by Edvard Munch | Bogdan G. Marin [10.Jun.08 16:29] |
| "Those drums that beat the walls of heart" I think that it should have had a more isolated sense as well, not only a sense of terror, angst. I have gave you on neopoet 4/5 stars. | |
| = Takke mitt venn! (hope is well written) | Marius Surleac [10.Jun.08 16:34] |
| Thank you very much Willy for your support on my poetic evolution. Indeed, I found to be more useful using the image of "Shrik", because it can send the reader's imagination right where the basic idea stands. About rhyme and rhythm, I decided that I should come back in the area of old classic poetry. Thank you once again and I appreciate it! Best regards, Marius | |
| = thanks! | Marius Surleac [10.Jun.08 16:46] |
| I appreciate your kind comment Bogdan, but there is truly a sense of angst and terror, and “those drums that beat the walls of heart” inflicts the idea of high emotions, of fear – pure physiological phenomenon. Marius! | |
| = . | Bogdan G. Marin [10.Jun.08 18:30] |
| "pure physiological phenomenon" indeed. Good Work! | |
| = Great work! | Constantin Severin [13.Jun.08 15:27] |
| Dear Marius, Edvard Munch is one of my favourite artists and I was also inspired by his work ''The Scream'' when I wrote my poem ''Improvisations on armonic key'' in 1995. I think we are both expressionist writers and it's a special event for my spiritual life to be in touch with you and your literary works. Best regards, Constantin | |
| = my kind regards, Constantin! | Marius Surleac [13.Jun.08 20:21] |
| Constantin, thank you very much for the kindness shared on my poem and for the feedback given to me. I am glad that Edvard Munch is one of your favourites; my favourite is Dali. About expressionism, I wrote this poem as I saw the painting, and I am delight when I see that the expression of my poem and the painting as well are well received by the readers. Best wishes, Marius | |
| = Best wishes, Dada | andrada-martina creta [22.Jun.08 17:02] |
| Firstly thank you for commenting on my work. I`ve just posted chapter 3 and 4 if you want to read them. Secondly I love the poem,expecialy the second stanza,the imagery there is great | |
| = Thank you Dada! | Marius Surleac [22.Jun.08 17:12] |
| Thank you very much Dada for your kind comment. About your work, you're welcome and relax; we will read your texts as well. Best wishes, Marius | |