| = lost childhood|
|I see a three parts structured poem: the first part is very visual and coloured - it reminds me exactly about my childhood with old back white TV, about the 35lei ball, about girls with names of flowers, though I have to say that Marte Bèraud can not create something like that (only physical shapes, matter).|
The second and the third part wipe out the beautiful memories and make you think to a mechanical automation of our own life; and also these two parts slows down the burst from the beginning.
Though, one small observation, there should be "in front of the scientists" instead of "in fromt".
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|Marius, modified where wrong!|
Thank you very much for your words!