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 =  punctuatie
Rugescu Ioana Adina
[23.Jun.08 23:36]
cenușei dupa mine nu suna bine!
ca o veșnică iluzie- as alege poate ca o perpetua iluzie, sau infinita iluzie...variante!
Mi-a placut: amintirile imi trec in stoluri!

Gîndurile ce s-au născut
acum sa pierd
cred ca ar suna mai bine , mai romaneste acum se pierd!
Lipsa oricaror semne de punctuatie face dificila intelegerea textului si deasemenea aprecierea lui.

Ultima strofa este mult mai buna...
Succes!
RIA



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