| = well done! | Marius Surleac [26.Jun.08 08:59] |
| First of all, congrats for hitting the first page. There is imagery standing between words and also stringed sensations within memories; development! Best wishes, Marius | |
| = I second all of Marius' words here.... | John Willy Kopperud [27.Jun.08 19:22] |
| ...and I'd like to add; your writing in English is on a very high level on this site, Lee Ann! Very often i detect grammar and syntax errors in the poems here, some of them grave. That is never the case with you. Congratulations and cheers from Willy | |
| = ty 2 :) | Lee Ann Hardt [30.Jun.08 14:23] |
| I am really glad my exercises have a long arm here, I could say I am aware of my English level, but not so much of putting it into worthy verse. I know what you mean, I've noticed that too. Thanks :) | |
| = yes | Rodica Vasilescu [09.Oct.12 17:25] |
| this is really nice, so short and yet so long and full of feelings. sincerity != sweetness, that's what i like here. this is my favourite part: "we exchange hats like others do letters and each bears more things to forget as if my life spiraling wild in a hot air balloon isn't enough" it's perfect, congrats | |
| = It matches the song's rhythm | Jean Arvin [14.Nov.08 00:25] |
| A wonderful dark image , you've done well to bind it with Theatre of Tragedy. | |