| = well done! | Marius Surleac [28.Jun.08 19:25] |
| Well done Mihai. I feel surrealism invading your poem, you know how to "chew" the words and swallow the readers' breath. I found the second stanza the most wonderful within the poem! Great job! | |
| + Splendid images... | John Willy Kopperud [28.Jun.08 19:55] |
| ...in this mystifying narration. It leaves me with the wish to pass between Scylla and Charybdis, shaped as huge ice cubicles in the gigantic longdrink of life. Cheers from Willy | |
| = good | Daniela Voicu [29.Jun.08 07:38] |
| Wonderful poem!The dream help us to know the surrealism . Very deep poem , senses, u are not a dream , that it's the fight with your soul , identity . My opinion . I like the poem very much. | |
| = . | Vicleanu Mihaita [29.Jun.08 02:24] |
| thank you both for such nice words! my best regards to both of you. | |
| = . | Vicleanu Mihaita [29.Jun.08 10:47] |
| thank you daniela. kind regards. | |
| = great. | Christopher Thripp [29.Jun.08 23:05] |
| great work mihai the language and feelings shiver the soul. | |
| = . | Vicleanu Mihaita [29.Jun.08 23:18] |
| thank you Chris. kind regads. | |