| = can i have | Ecaterina Bargan [07.Aug.08 03:25] |
| a lavel of comentator? please. | |
| = my opinion! | Marius Surleac [07.Aug.08 09:39] |
| First of all I find it more suitable to use “elementary school” instead of “school children”. Also, “And you are surprised by the facts about which you story” – I think that needs to be changed “about which your story” (what?-Is with the “story”). “I don’t dreamed” – “I didn’t” or “I don’t dream” “every day are increasingly step” – the verbs need some polish | |
| = thank's marius | Ecaterina Bargan [07.Aug.08 09:51] |
| you helped me a lot. | |
| = !!! | Marius Surleac [07.Aug.08 09:53] |
| "children" instead of "childread" | |
| = that is | Ecaterina Bargan [07.Aug.08 09:56] |
| an typos. thx. | |
| = thank you | Christopher Thripp [07.Aug.08 16:56] |
| once again i like this marius pointed out the obvious ...your words excite me and your depth is good...a massive improvement on the last ... great job... | |
| = chris | Ecaterina Bargan [07.Aug.08 21:40] |
| thank you for stepping by. you are my friend. | |
| = thanks .. | Christopher Thripp [08.Aug.08 05:08] |
| of that i am thank you ... | |
| + star | Christopher Thripp [13.Aug.08 01:55] |
| star | |
| - ! | Marius Surleac [13.Aug.08 08:02] |
| Chris, please justify your star! | |