| = !!! | Marius Surleac [07.Aug.08 22:05] |
| About the level - maybe after improving the english language! About the text there are some problems.Some small tips: “I go / my steps are not on parallel lines” instead of “I go my steps are not on a parallels line” , “Nistru” instead of “nistru”– to point out that is about the river Nistru, because maybe many do not know anything about. Also “I don’t run in the morning while I wake up sooner than when jog and when i leaving the door open” – should be polished because it is really wiped by irregularities. The same with “ don’t wonder me never” “the entrance into government” instead of “entry” “doesn’t know that is open(ed)” instead of “don’t knows” This is just what I saw within a quick reading. My advice to you, is to verify the text few times before posting. Best wishes, Marius | |
| = marius | Ecaterina Bargan [08.Aug.08 15:34] |
| i had changed something. thank zou a lot. | |
| = !!! | Marius Surleac [08.Aug.08 15:37] |
| One more that I didn't saw "when I leaving I let" should be "when I left I let" | |
| = it is | Ecaterina Bargan [11.Aug.08 11:36] |
| ok now. thank you, marius. | |