| + traquilness | Marius Surleac [12.Aug.08 11:21] |
| Smoothness, well shaped, kindness, the last three lines magnificent. In strange days we all feel strange. The remains revealed by the past can signify a lot for the soul. Time for promotion! Well done Florin! Best wishes, Marius | |
| = Thank you! | Florin Hulubei [12.Aug.08 12:41] |
| Thank you for the appreciation and the words, Marius! Best regards! | |
| = I read this is a vivid depiction... | John Willy Kopperud [12.Aug.08 19:10] |
| ...of someone watching the (frightened?) self from the outside. The finishing touch is beautiful, with those concrete images once again ending up in the more or less unreal. Cheers from Willy | |
| = P.S. | John Willy Kopperud [12.Aug.08 19:10] |
| The title here and the title of one of the very best songs written by Jim Morrison and The Doors are identical. I suspect that this is no coincidence. Willy | |
| = hej! | Florin Hulubei [13.Aug.08 10:28] |
| hej, willy! thank you very much for the words! Really glad to see you read me! ha det så bra! | |