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 =  a lot of storms
Marius Surleac
[14.Sep.08 23:38]
Real depiction for the forces of nature. That is pity that these disasters happen and a lot of people are to remain without anything.

One small observation: I think that there should be “wolflike in its eerie sound” instead of “it’s”

Well done!

Cheers,
Marius

 =  thanks
Lynn West
[15.Sep.08 03:27]
Thank you - I fixed that and appreicate your input

 =  'fury of nature'
Monica David
[16.Sep.08 11:07]
I like the poem very much, I fell the fury of nature. No one can oppose to the storms.





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