| = cube's poetica | Marius Surleac [29.Sep.08 20:46] |
| Great art of poetry here! I like how you pointed the cube living, but I ask you if the "cube" has a certain meaning? - Because you could also use "circle" and "sphere" (which signifies the perfection and is more perfect than the cube itself)? Or is just a personification? I like it though! Best wishes, Marius | |
| = I like it too | Mike Aspros [30.Sep.08 18:27] |
| this speaks to me as being unique before its copied and mass-imitated. Beautiful. | |
| = Marius and Mike... | Romulus Campan Maramuresanu [30.Sep.08 19:35] |
| Marius, being a (lower class, but still...) musician as well, I write only what flows within the inner song of my word-thoughts. Meanwhile, you are right, sphere and circle are so much "more" perfect. One thing they lack though: the sharpness and edges of the cube's angles. Both inclusive and wounding. Like the undersigned... Mike, true my friend. Sometimes I have the feeling of writing to a world of illiterates. Thank God for people like ye... Thank you friends. | |
| = and with that much introduction | Veronica Valeanu [05.Feb.09 21:39] |
| LITERATI VS GLITTERATI (not quite illiterate, but...it's par for the course) your poem -a paragon! all the best, Veronica | |
| = Short, concise... | John Willy Kopperud [06.Feb.09 16:56] |
| ...and food for thought. That's what I like! Cheers from Willy | |
| = being ahead of your time | Simona Sumanaru [06.Feb.09 17:27] |
| may feel like Hell, but it is Heaven. I liked this. | |
| = Veronica, Willy, Simona,,, | Romulus Campan Maramuresanu [06.Feb.09 21:11] |
| Dear Veronica, Willy, Simona, I am overwhelmed by the joy to be read by you. Honestly, you are today's cream on today's cake which baked so painful, but nevertheless glorious. | |
| = . | Lelia Vatasescu [15.Apr.11 19:43] |
| such a powerful effect for such a simple conjunction of words. very nice. | |