| = welcome back Chris! | Marius Surleac [01.Oct.08 10:33] |
| Hi Chris! Glad you're back! Finding your own peace, two minds in one, desire with realism. I sense a change in your style! Though I have to point out a small mistake: there is "symmetry" instead of "symetry". Cheers, Marius | |
| = thanks marius. | Christopher Thripp [01.Oct.08 18:57] |
| thank you marius ...i am glad to be back and thank you for your comments ..appreciated. | |
| = It's ok | Edgar A. Baguio [02.Oct.08 15:46] |
| There is nothing wrong with the word "symmetry" in this poem. Marius, please check your dictionary, ok? Don't rush too much when correcting our poems here ok? Chris, I like this one. Your imagery is commanding. | |
| = !!! | Marius Surleac [02.Oct.08 15:49] |
| Edgar, please pay attention to what you're inflicting. I said that is not ok because Chris had the word written with one "m" before making the change. | |
| = thanks | Christopher Thripp [02.Oct.08 23:05] |
| thank you edgar i appreciate your comments also.. and i did have 1 m before marius corrected me ... thank you both... | |
| = Sorry... | Edgar A. Baguio [03.Oct.08 22:06] |
| Oh sorry...Marius..maybe your syntactic structure or should I say my analysis to your syntax is wrong... I don't want to inflict anything here..I just want to create balance and harmony here, ok? | |
| = Hi Chris | Mike Aspros [03.Oct.08 08:16] |
| good voice and vision, I enjoy and look forward to reading your poems, nice to see you again. best, mike | |
| = thank you mike... | Christopher Thripp [03.Oct.08 09:16] |
| thank you mike i appreciate your comments also ..great to be back... | |
| = dr jekyll and mr hyde... | Corina Gina Papouis [03.Oct.08 12:09] |
| ..your 2 minds, aren't they! Which one to do you prefer Chris? (Curiosity killed the cat!:)) Cheers, Corina | |
| = corina. | Christopher Thripp [03.Oct.08 17:19] |
| hey corina ...my dreams are my goals ...but reality puts these on hold for a while...but i have lived them before and i will live them again...i am determined... use my email if you would like me to delve further into this... | |
| = yes! | Lynn West [04.Oct.08 02:28] |
| when our "two minds" clash.... ah, then there is lightning and the gods tremble... reach into the corners of darkness and draw from it my dear - love it! | |
| = lynn. | Christopher Thripp [04.Oct.08 08:02] |
| thank you lynn... appreciated lots!!! | |