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Vicleanu Mihaita
[31.Oct.08 21:09]
very powerful lines, somehow reflective thoughts....enjoyed the flow and the originality... not too good at comments...but i honestly say...i loved it.
Kind regards, Mihai

 =  thank you mihai...
Christopher Thripp
[01.Nov.08 10:25]
thank you very much mihai...
you appreciation is very much welcome...
when you write about real life it works because it actually happened too many people get into fantasy land ...

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Corina Gina Papouis
[03.Nov.08 14:01]
you text had a counselling effect on me..was the poem written to a woman, by any chance?:)
well done,
Corina

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Christopher Thripp
[04.Nov.08 00:12]
i am very flattered corina ...this was written from an outside view looking inward ...intended for a women and a man in the early stages of a relationship.




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