| = shadows showing the flow of time | Marius Surleac [06.Nov.08 21:05] |
| Chris, I like this poem. I like the visual effects that are hidden through the words, the patience, the pathos, the regret reflected by the description here. I remark: "mimicking the shadows we dance" / "the ground salty beneath our feet the/ beach of solitude announces the waves/ of time ..." One small error though: "announces" instead of "anounces" Well done! Cheers my friend, Marius | |
| = good poem | Daniela Voicu [07.Nov.08 22:29] |
| Nice poem. | |
| = marius /dani | Christopher Thripp [13.Nov.08 10:36] |
| thank you marius and thank you dani... | |
| + "We are such stuss as dreams are made on"... | John Willy Kopperud [13.Nov.08 11:39] |
| ...W.S. said a while ago. There is an exquisite spiritual, yet concrete quality here that brought forth the quote from the master. Cheers from Willy | |
| = Ooops..we are such STUFF | John Willy Kopperud [13.Nov.08 11:41] |
| W | |
| = willy... | Christopher Thripp [14.Nov.08 00:39] |
| thank you willy ...much appreciated ...it's good to be back writing again... | |