| = Touching really... | John Willy Kopperud [17.Nov.08 10:06] |
| ...and a sophisticated use of images, especially those connected to the tree. Just be aware; The flower they so much beloved...? In English you can talk about the beloved or the one you love. The verb can't be used this way. One solution might be: "The flower they loved so deeply." Or maybe: "That most beloved flower". Cheers from Willy | |
| = yes, Willy | Muresan Laura [17.Nov.08 14:04] |
| you confirmed my doubt. I knew there was something odd about that verb the second day I read the poem. I will accept one of your solutions;) | |
| = So nice... | John Willy Kopperud [18.Nov.08 18:21] |
| ...to see the poem fulfill it's shape. Yes, it's good! Cheers from Willy | |