| = the end? | Romulus Campan Maramuresanu [27.Nov.08 13:14] |
| are you sure you finished your poem? "and" and " through" seem to be awaiting for something... | |
| = . | Marius Surleac [30.Nov.08 15:36] |
| I guess there is "stars' pit" or "star's pit" | |
| = ! | Corina Gina Papouis [30.Nov.08 23:01] |
| Ioana, once again you surprise your audience with such a good poem. Compressed as it is the screen of the world, yet the tension so well controlled within. Marius, I think that "the stars' pit" here is about loads of stars rather than just the one! Otherwise it wouldn't be a pit, would it... Enjoyed it! Corina | |
| = true | Marius Surleac [01.Dec.08 11:50] |
| Corina, you're partially right about that pit - but both variants are right. Best wishes, to you both! Marius | |