| = final... | Marius Surleac [10.Dec.08 13:06] |
| "Living the moment" - the idea of the text, strong sustained by the verbs of same tense, but is a bit sad. One error though: "melancholy" instead of "meloncholy". Cheers, Marius | |
| = marius. | Christopher Thripp [10.Dec.08 22:50] |
| real life my friend refined vision of real events... always brings out the best in all of us ...sad as it maybe there is always another day...releasing the pain in words is a great way to express every emotion this is just one of many... thank you marius...much appreciated as always. | |
| = view | felix nicolau [24.Dec.08 19:59] |
| indeed, it would've been great to benefit of a visual support, in order to be better visible the tension of despair and hatred | |
| = felix | Christopher Thripp [24.Dec.08 21:21] |
| i would of loved to have had a graphic of that station ...i do have a pic when the incident happened... i thank you felix | |