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Luna
Tisocco Gustavo
[04.Jan.09 16:32]
buen poema Luna, un abrazo gus.
Quitaría la coma de fui y la subiría al verso anterior.
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Gus
luna rosado
[05.Jan.09 16:43]
Gracias, Gus. Un abrazo
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