| = The Streams of Oblivion | Heghedus Camelia [01.Dec.06 00:59] |
| fine | |
| = thanks & sorry - Cami | Edilberto González Trejos [18.Jun.07 15:10] |
| Sorry I forgot to thank you Cami | |
| = interesting... | Marius Surleac [09.Apr.08 10:22] |
| Interesting text that points out a more interesting image for some hard moments felt inside your heart. Nice one! Cheers from Marius! | |
| = Is this about an individuals remorse... | John Willy Kopperud [09.Apr.08 10:52] |
| ...or are you talking about the feeling in a much more general and abstract sense, amigo? Your poem makes me wonder and by this sense of wonder you have gained something when it comes to poetry. Cheers from Willy | |
| = Marius - Willy - Remorse Free | Edilberto González Trejos [09.Apr.08 21:51] |
| Marius, for me it´s an image, a metaphor and a state-of-soul - IF ANY - Thanks for your comm. **** Willy, Of course there is gain in poetry if your heart urges you to write and you can never stop... And I think you can also give this poem a dimension on STOP LOOKING BACK, of Water (which could also be fire) cleaning life and soul. Regards from SONGUS | |