| = heat, indeed | Motoc Lavinia [24.May.06 18:55] |
| Again, it is supposed to be a glimpse, maybe you could work a little bit on the first two parts, shorten them?? I miss that heat. | |
| = boiling on the surface | andreea l. [24.May.06 20:25] |
| "there are a few dead in town, my love/And so i came to tell you" - an incoherent translation of bacovia's "cuptor". sitting at the cafeteria window, eh? :) | |
| = heat is in town! | Florin Hulubei [24.May.06 21:05] |
| Lavinia, I could work on them, but how short should they be? Thank you and come again! Andreea, Bacovia is one of my favorites. I like cafeterias, indeed! Can you feel the heat? Thank you! | |