| = to be revised | Luminita Suse [01.Jan.07 20:38] |
| Why? poetry [ ] - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - by Balc Oana Nicoleta [Prkgrl] 2006-12-29 | | At the end of your heart You will found me; Because, all the time I was right there... All for you my darling, All for nothing... It's over? Why? is the real question. At the end of my heart I will found a start Or... I will found something... I will found my way To get over myself. But... every day a day goes by; I try to play truent In my own life for nothing, And now I don't know why... | |
| = ? | felix nicolau [02.Jan.07 10:51] |
| correct,pls, -truant- | |
| = Good image | Bogdan Olteanu [10.Sep.07 16:58] |
| "At the end of my heart I found a start Or... I found something... I found my way To get over myself." This is quite the way to see things... The image is very good, in my opinion. Keep up the good work, Oana! | |