| = the stuff-est one | felix nicolau [22.Mar.07 23:08] |
| yeap, this is infinitely simpler and more anti-pathetic than your romanian texts. this one is fast, tender, and peepy! | |
| = ... | Flueraºu Petre [22.Mar.07 23:32] |
| Adela, this poem is very interesting, il offers you space for meditation... congratulations, I really liked it... regards petre | |
| = Felix | Adela Setti [23.Mar.07 14:46] |
| English is infinitely simpler and more anti-pathetic than Romanian, here's the proof :) thank you for apreciating, it means alot to me. Adela | |
| = Petre | Adela Setti [23.Mar.07 14:46] |
| I'm glad you liked this little moment, I hope I could have the chance and inspiration to write more of it. Adela | |
| = Stuff | John Willy Kopperud [23.Mar.07 10:28] |
By approaching emotion through everyday actions and objects you add another dimension of nearness to the poem. This approach is often used in poetry and serves as a safeguard against the patheticism mentioned by Felix. Congratulations, Adela Willy | |
| = John | Adela Setti [23.Mar.07 14:46] |
| I'm glad you liked it :) Adela | |
| = look that over | Odãgescu Bogdan [28.Mar.07 13:40] |
| I've read the text in Romanian, and it sounds ten times better. However, the message still runs through you. Please look over the order of the adjectives... It's colour, origin, material, purpose etc :) | |
| = Bogdan :) | Adela Setti [28.Mar.07 14:07] |
| this is ten times natural. I've learned English from songs, Romanian from Mom. glad you liked the translation, though. Adela | |