| = Let there be light | Andreea Drãguleasa [13.Nov.03 09:01] |
| Light may represent life, reason, truth, righteousness, purity. It is in general a symbol with positive meanings. The way you link it to the notion of time (seconds - bits of lightning), our fourth dimension, feels like a needed symmetry to the notion "light-year". I think that instead of "lookings", "looks" would do better. I definitely like your poem, it is a prolongation of my own concepts. Andreea | |
| = diluted... | Marius Surleac [26.May.08 00:27] |
| Das ist a great poem! "Seconds = bits of lightning" / "eye of seconds = thunder of lookings". There is a surrealist stance diluted a little bit because of time passing by. Cheers from Marius! | |