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 =  cheezy
Sigartau Alex
[01.Jul.04 12:22]
i find this poem to be a little on the naive side.
expressions are used ("couldn't be more wrong", "who cares", "Show must go on") that i don't think make much sense when put into context. at times the english used is deficient.
overall, i find this poem to be quite cheezy.

 =  Plain
Diana Pacuraru
[09.Feb.05 01:45]
This poem is on the side of the simple ones, that don't leave a feeling after you read them. Just plain. You forget.

 =  diana
Anca Mihai
[10.Feb.05 15:13]
you find it plain and I cannot disagree with you as every poem appeals to a certain person...it is enough it appeals to me because it reflects my state of mind in a certain moment...it's about trying to understand the poem and its inside not just read it for once and feel sensible.sometimes it's necessary for you to try and feels what the poems wants to express.as you do when you look at a painting:at first there is nothing special but with a second glance a spark of its secret springs to your mind.isn't it?:)




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