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Veronica Valeanu
[07.Sep.09 19:22]
i stopped by because i am a great admirer of harpies. this pair harpy-cherub has an interesting genealogy. it's like the 2 opposite sides of a coin. angel, as middle state of existence.
this harpy seems to be digging into navels...

in the end you should have kept adressing to him instead of taking a distance: [But he, that cherub mine]
i would suggest: "from divine scraps". also, the word "mine" is somehow positioned in a difficult way and appears too many times.

looking forward to seeing more texts written by you,
V.V.




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