| = simplistic | Carmen Fenesan [28.Aug.04 01:01] |
| It's a nice idea, and expressed pretty well in the first stance. Second stanza on the other hand falls into cliche. A world to perfect to live in , drowning in tears.. that's something that belongs in The Young and the Restless. You can do better! | |
| = www.freewebs.com/rendezvous_with_anus | Lúcia da Conceição Cruz Roque [29.Aug.04 01:24] |
| The Young and Restless? Thanks for your comment! | |
| = "The Young and Restless?" | Carmen Fenesan [01.Sep.04 21:30] |
What, it hasn't been translated into portugese, too? :) It's a soap opera.. you know, one of those shows where everyone's in love and cries all the time. | |
| = Lúcia Roque | Lúcia da Conceição Cruz Roque [20.Sep.04 00:17] |
| I had never heard about it! But I agree! The second stanza is not good at all! But the first... I just love it so much! | |
| = Poem | Daniel Dinescu [22.Sep.04 16:11] |
| I think the poem is a sum of thoughts, I enjoyed some of its first part... I like your name! :) It's a poem. Talk to you later, DD | |
| = Wistful | Lúcia da Conceição Cruz Roque [01.Oct.04 17:49] |
| You like my name? That's nice! Thank you! | |