| = Cory | Andreea Drãguleasa [26.Sep.04 01:00] |
| Surprised to meet you in this lyric form. Different, but none the less charming. A. | |
| = Andreea | Corina Dragomir [26.Sep.04 21:11] |
| winged and garlended I clasp the hollow city bubbled with brimming kisses where the ceremony of innocence is drowned in the falcons' gaze till a tear falls on a divers shore Awe-stricken or not you have to see my axel vaults that are to become self-evident from now onward as my lyric forms find themselves at the mercy of the waves and as clumsy as they may appear they only stand for transparent attempts to emprison layered meanings with a thought-provoking specific aim. thank you for passing by don't hesitate to come again! Cory | |
| = Andreea:) | Corina Dragomir [26.Sep.04 12:18] |
| Awe-stricken or not you have to remain aloft flapping your wings in the hollow city as I have used a gimmick that might work out properly causing giddiness unless the two-wheeled chariot goes through the gyre of time where the innocence drowns in the falcons' gaze with falling tears on a divers shore. thanks a lot for passing by and don't hesitate to come again. Cory | |
| = Radu | Corina Dragomir [26.Sep.04 21:59] |
| I want you to erase my last commentary as when I log in for the first time something wierd happens, namely it appears too late. P.S (that's exactly what happened to the one made to Oriana's poem last night) thank you for understanding Cory | |
| = shadows | ion amariutei [03.Oct.04 08:35] |
| say, words just drifting - vertical worlds raising shadows even simpler: the word is the world - can you hear the sound of one mind silenced? true | false i guess distance would be just memory refusing to forget itself and since i'll have to finish somewhere eventually, is not the word, is the shadow of word... | |
| = Ion | Corina Dragomir [10.Oct.04 14:52] |
| My imagery deals mostly with the Jungian concept of the shadow self through the re-envisioning of fairy tales and myths as a means of commenting on the hypocrisies of human interaction. malevolence, suffering and the hope for divine reward - the shadow lurks in all scenarios. How do we interact with ourselves in those moments of total darkness and what do we gain from those experiences? i grabbed the memory beneath the milky twighlight tricked by a snake Thank you Cory | |
| + sneak snaking away | ion amariutei [16.Oct.04 07:59] |
| guilt by memory, self the only shadow casting its own shadow how did language sneak (snake) into this? | |
| = running up the hill of electric dreams | Corina Dragomir [18.Oct.04 16:45] |
| In its entire context a complex debate on the symbolism of the "snake" may determine us going in the backyard of the memory through a multitude of possible associations related to how a kind of initiation fulfills the psychic awareness of the transition from this life to the next. the bible uses the symbol of the serpent in the garden of eden to represent satan. One could also be reminded of the snake as a phalic symbol enabling seemingly the embodiment of a mediation between earth and heaven. a sleep paralysis is like teeth in dreams mastering transformation. sexuality,psychic energy, intuitive wisdom alongside with the unconscious guards my true and total self shading it into a sewage where rope-dancers eat rotten apples. language always forays hidden meanings, you know that! your coming back to this text stands for a direct proof of appreciation which turned my icebound day into a fireball ready to lay on the seedless margin of a lightning. i'm a dragon within sight:) Thank you, Cory | |